Improving Sentences

Bored by your own writing? Let Tim and Moby teach you how to improve your sentences in this BrainPOP UK movie! First, you’ll learn some things that make a sentence sound bad - like being too long or written in the passive voice. In this educational, animated movie you’ll find out how to make your sentences more exciting by introducing modifiers, (descriptive words) and strengthening your vocabulary; and you’ll also learn how to explain your feelings and give your sentence some direction. You need never put your readers to sleep again!

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Improving Sentences